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| Like it? | | yes | | 25% | [ 2 ] | | no | | 75% | [ 6 ] |
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TJ
Posts: 667
Age: 16
Location: Mandalore
|  Subject: Venator Bridge (my first MOC i've posted here)  Sun Feb 14, 2010 4:14 pm | |
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Harahk
Posts: 390
Location: United States of America. North-Eastern state.
| | Subject: Re: Venator Bridge (my first MOC i've posted here) Sun Feb 14, 2010 4:49 pm | |
| I say yes because it looks really nice with your customs clones with it and Faie is cool but he needs a hood and cape.  |
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CommanderNexu
Holonet Reporters
Posts: 128
Age: 15
Location: New York
| | Subject: Re: Venator Bridge (my first MOC i've posted here) Sun Feb 14, 2010 6:50 pm | |
| You need to cover the back wall completely. |
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Fithboy
Moderator
Posts: 1039
Age: 16
Location: The spinny-round chair
| | Subject: Re: Venator Bridge (my first MOC i've posted here) Mon Feb 15, 2010 12:42 am | |
| Greeblings. Greeblings. Greeblings. This needs a lot more detail, shape and proper Venator look. |
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Harahk
Posts: 390
Location: United States of America. North-Eastern state.
| | Subject: Re: Venator Bridge (my first MOC i've posted here) Mon Feb 15, 2010 9:21 am | |
| Yeah, it is still looking very undeveloped. |
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The_Custom_One
The Sith Lord
Posts: 1903
Age: 16
Location: I am from the Great UNKNOWN!
| | Subject: Re: Venator Bridge (my first MOC i've posted here) Mon Feb 15, 2010 9:39 am | |
| Also, is that the correct color of the bridge? ______________________________________________________________________________________________ <><  |
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Fithboy
Moderator
Posts: 1039
Age: 16
Location: The spinny-round chair
| | Subject: Re: Venator Bridge (my first MOC i've posted here) Mon Feb 15, 2010 9:45 am | |
| | the_customizer wrote: | | Also, is that the correct color of the bridge? |
No its not. The bridge is more circular and light grey. |
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The_Custom_One
The Sith Lord
Posts: 1903
Age: 16
Location: I am from the Great UNKNOWN!
| | Subject: Re: Venator Bridge (my first MOC i've posted here) Mon Feb 15, 2010 11:20 am | |
| I think there should also be a Jedi with them, if possible. ______________________________________________________________________________________________ <>< |
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TJ
Posts: 667
Age: 16
Location: Mandalore
| | Subject: Re: Venator Bridge (my first MOC i've posted here) Mon Feb 15, 2010 2:14 pm | |
| You know I should redo this, but the thing is I dont have any Jedi lightsabers  , only a sith lightsaber  . |
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TJ
Posts: 667
Age: 16
Location: Mandalore
| | Subject: Re: Venator Bridge (my first MOC i've posted here) Mon Feb 15, 2010 2:16 pm | |
| | CommanderNexu wrote: | | You need to cover the back wall completely. |
Thats not a wall, thats a screen. |
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TJ
Posts: 667
Age: 16
Location: Mandalore
| | Subject: Re: Venator Bridge (my first MOC i've posted here) Mon Feb 15, 2010 2:18 pm | |
| Im not gonna have it as a vaenator bridge, maybe a clone medic transport. |
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cralegoboy
Posts: 150
Age: 16
Location: AR
| | Subject: Re: Venator Bridge (my first MOC i've posted here) Mon Feb 15, 2010 6:20 pm | |
| It's nice, but it needs some work. For one, it's a little messy. Try to clean it up a bit. |
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Fithboy
Moderator
Posts: 1039
Age: 16
Location: The spinny-round chair
| | Subject: Re: Venator Bridge (my first MOC i've posted here) Tue Feb 16, 2010 12:08 am | |
| Read the rules. Don't double post unless you've left a 24 hour gap in between each post. |
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TJ
Posts: 667
Age: 16
Location: Mandalore
| | Subject: Re: Venator Bridge (my first MOC i've posted here) Tue Feb 16, 2010 9:09 am | |
| Ok, Ill stop whatever you'r talking about.  |
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The_Custom_One
The Sith Lord
Posts: 1903
Age: 16
Location: I am from the Great UNKNOWN!
| | Subject: Re: Venator Bridge (my first MOC i've posted here) Tue Feb 16, 2010 3:44 pm | |
| There definately needs to be a solid background. Instead of having a few things here and there. ______________________________________________________________________________________________ <>< |
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