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 Venator Bridge (my first MOC i've posted here)

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Like it?
yes
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TJ



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PostSubject: Venator Bridge (my first MOC i've posted here)   Sun Feb 14, 2010 4:14 pm

This is a Venator Class bridge that I've created!


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Hope you guys like it!

That's Faie if your wondering! He's a hologram!


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PostSubject: Re: Venator Bridge (my first MOC i've posted here)   Sun Feb 14, 2010 4:49 pm

I say yes because it looks really nice with your customs clones with it and Faie is cool but he needs a hood and cape.
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PostSubject: Re: Venator Bridge (my first MOC i've posted here)   Sun Feb 14, 2010 6:50 pm

You need to cover the back wall completely.
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PostSubject: Re: Venator Bridge (my first MOC i've posted here)   Mon Feb 15, 2010 12:42 am

Greeblings. Greeblings. Greeblings. This needs a lot more detail, shape and proper Venator look.
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PostSubject: Re: Venator Bridge (my first MOC i've posted here)   Mon Feb 15, 2010 9:21 am

Yeah, it is still looking very undeveloped.
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PostSubject: Re: Venator Bridge (my first MOC i've posted here)   Mon Feb 15, 2010 9:39 am

Also, is that the correct color of the bridge?

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PostSubject: Re: Venator Bridge (my first MOC i've posted here)   Mon Feb 15, 2010 9:45 am

the_customizer wrote:
Also, is that the correct color of the bridge?


No its not. The bridge is more circular and light grey.
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PostSubject: Re: Venator Bridge (my first MOC i've posted here)   Mon Feb 15, 2010 11:20 am

I think there should also be a Jedi with them, if possible.

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PostSubject: Re: Venator Bridge (my first MOC i've posted here)   Mon Feb 15, 2010 2:14 pm

You know I should redo this, but the thing is I dont have any Jedi lightsabers , only a sith lightsaber .
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PostSubject: Re: Venator Bridge (my first MOC i've posted here)   Mon Feb 15, 2010 2:16 pm

CommanderNexu wrote:
You need to cover the back wall completely.
Thats not a wall, thats a screen.
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PostSubject: Re: Venator Bridge (my first MOC i've posted here)   Mon Feb 15, 2010 2:18 pm

Im not gonna have it as a vaenator bridge, maybe a clone medic transport.
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PostSubject: Re: Venator Bridge (my first MOC i've posted here)   Mon Feb 15, 2010 6:20 pm

It's nice, but it needs some work. For one, it's a little messy. Try to clean it up a bit.
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PostSubject: Re: Venator Bridge (my first MOC i've posted here)   Tue Feb 16, 2010 12:08 am

Read the rules. Don't double post unless you've left a 24 hour gap in between each post.
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PostSubject: Re: Venator Bridge (my first MOC i've posted here)   Tue Feb 16, 2010 9:09 am

Ok, Ill stop whatever you'r talking about.
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PostSubject: Re: Venator Bridge (my first MOC i've posted here)   Tue Feb 16, 2010 3:44 pm

There definately needs to be a solid background. Instead of having a few things here and there.

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