Not bad, needs to be some black twisted metal pieces lying around from the exploded gunship, otherwise, it is not that bad... You should also include some parts of Keeli's Clones like red arms, legs, something like that. Because, it wasn't just Keeli and Ima Gun Di down there by themselves. SO including the "remains" of Keeli's troopers would be way better.
Also, the brown makes it look like it is in the jungle. But Ryloth is a desert, so you should probably make the floor tan, it would look WAY better.
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